On another note, I will post a rough draft of a poem here to give you a taste of what your decision might affect. This is my first attempt at a sonnet, and I already know that the iambic pentameter falls apart pretty early. So, just tell me what you think, and I'll soon put up a revised version of this. Also, you can suggest a title for it! See, ain't I grand?
I am a man, alone by my own choice.
Alone, indeed, for years on end to date.
The world was not aware of my small voice,
Nor did it see I could one day be great.
They threw me to the curb, crushed my small soul
Beneath the boot of men far greater then.
So I ran far, though the miles took toll,
And I, alone, have passed the years through pen.
Someday I will go out and feel the world;
Feel it, and see how it too might have grown.
I'll sense the world out from which I was hurled,
And see if they will reap the seeds they'd sown.
They'll see my form, and hear my song for what
It is. I'll be stronger with eyes unshut.
It is. I'll be stronger with eyes unshut.
And there you have my first sonnet, a poem in process. Tell me what you think, and offer up some possible titles!
"Experience: that most brutal of teachers. But you learn, my God do you learn." - C.S. Lewis
My opinion- write whatever comes to your mind.. Creativity is not about structure (unless you're talking about architecture.. oops pardon the pun) so I really think you should post what you want, write what you want, and you'll experience a larger creative flow.
ReplyDeleteLove, big bro